Tuesday, 24 February 2015
week one
the three worst things in trench warfare are the pests, the gas attacks and the poor response to the newly injured. The pests are the worst possible thing to have in the trenches because they can carry millions of germs which can kill or seriously harm you. next I would like to explain how the gas attacks can be the second worst,these are second worst because the chemical are chlorine and hydrogen. lastly the medical team is too slow because by the time that the team arrives their patiaint might be dead.
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
I like that you explained the pests were bad, not just because they were gross (which is what I focus on), but also that they were bad because of the germs that they carried and spread disease. The next two examples are also good. You are the only one I've read so far that talks about the problems with the medical teams.
ReplyDeleteYou second example isn't explained quite as well as the others. It would be helpful if you explained why chlorine was bad. (Hydrogen wasn't a gas that was used in WWI).