Tuesday 24 February 2015

week two

the treaty of Versailles is too harsh because the allied powers expect Germany to pay for everything.I think that Germany should have no military but the soldiers should become the border patrol.I believe that they do that because they are over qualified to protect Germany. that would give Germany some indipendence
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  1. L.Unger30 March 2015 at 08:26

    Jordan, you state your opinion clearly. I wonder if you could have maybe explained why paying for everything is too harsh. Do you agree that German is to blame for the war?

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  2. L.Unger30 March 2015 at 08:27

    Jordan, you could have written more to explain your point of view and support your opinion. You also need to be careful with sentence structure, spacing and capital letters.

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